From 151763dd1841199f22e3055ceaeb618867f5fdb4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Lyssa <75037904+thecatontheceiling@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Tue, 20 Aug 2024 03:45:13 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Update Online_KMS_Activation.cmd --- .../Activators/Online_KMS_Activation.cmd | 28 +++++++++---------- 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-) diff --git a/MAS/Separate-Files-Version/Activators/Online_KMS_Activation.cmd b/MAS/Separate-Files-Version/Activators/Online_KMS_Activation.cmd index b28764c..6fe9783 100644 --- a/MAS/Separate-Files-Version/Activators/Online_KMS_Activation.cmd +++ b/MAS/Separate-Files-Version/Activators/Online_KMS_Activation.cmd @@ -129,7 +129,7 @@ set "mas=ht%blank%tps%blank%://mass%blank%grave.dev/" sc query Null | find /i "RUNNING" if %errorlevel% NEQ 0 ( echo: -echo Null service, which is required for the script to operate, is not running. +echo the Null service, which is required for the script to operate, is not running. echo: echo: echo Help - %mas%troubleshoot @@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ cls pushd "%~dp0" >nul findstr /v "$" "%~nx0" && ( echo: -echo Error - Script either has an LF line ending issue or an empty line at the end of the script is missing. +echo Error - The script either has an LF line ending issue or an empty line at the end of the script is missing. echo: echo: echo Help - %mas%troubleshoot @@ -191,7 +191,7 @@ call :dk_setvar if %winbuild% LSS 7600 ( %nceline% echo Unsupported OS version detected [%winbuild%]. -echo Project is supported for Windows 7/8/8.1/10/11 and their Server equivalent. +echo MAS only supports Windows 7/8/8.1/10/11 and their Server equivalents. goto dk_done ) @@ -217,8 +217,8 @@ setlocal EnableDelayedExpansion echo "!_batf!" | find /i "!_ttemp!" %nul1% && ( if /i not "!_work!"=="!_ttemp!" ( %eline% -echo Script is launched from the temp folder. -echo Most likely you are running the script directly from the archive file. +echo The script was launched from the temp folder. +echo You are most likely running the script directly from the archive file. echo: echo Extract the archive file and launch the script from the extracted folder. goto dk_done @@ -259,7 +259,7 @@ goto dk_done if not defined _elev %psc% "start cmd.exe -arg '/c \"!_PSarg!\"' -verb runas" && exit /b %eline% echo This script needs administrator rights. -echo To do so, right click on this script and select 'Run as administrator'. +echo Right click on this script and select 'Run as administrator'. goto dk_done ) @@ -420,7 +420,7 @@ call :dk_chkmal if not exist %SysPath%\sppsvc.exe ( %eline% -echo [%SysPath%\sppsvc.exe] file is missing. Aborting... +echo [%SysPath%\sppsvc.exe] file is missing, aborting... echo: set fixes=%fixes% %mas%troubleshoot call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot" @@ -508,7 +508,7 @@ if exist "%SystemRoot%\Servicing\Packages\Microsoft-Windows-Server*EvalCorEditio if defined _eval ( reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion" /v EditionID %nul2% | find /i "Eval" %nul1% && ( -call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Eval Edition [Evaluation Editions cannot be activated outside of evaluation period.]" +call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Evaluation Edition [Evaluation editions cannot be activated outside of evaluation period.]" if defined _evalserv ( call :dk_color %Blue% "Go back to main menu and use [Change Edition] option." @@ -546,22 +546,22 @@ set /a UBR=0 if %osSKU%==191 if defined altkey if defined altedition ( for /f "skip=2 tokens=2*" %%a in ('reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion" /v UBR %nul6%') do if not errorlevel 1 set /a UBR=%%b if %winbuild% LSS 22598 if !UBR! LSS 2788 ( -call :dk_color %Blue% "Windows must to be updated to build 19044.2788 or higher for IotEnterpriseS %KS% activation." +call :dk_color %Blue% "Windows must be updated to build 19044.2788 or higher for IotEnterpriseS %KS% activation." ) ) if not defined key if defined notfoundaltactID ( -call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Alternate Edition For %KS% [%altedition% Activation ID Not Found]" +call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Alternate Edition for %KS% [%altedition% Activation ID Not Found]" ) if not defined key if not defined _gvlk ( echo [%winos% ^| %winbuild% ^| SKU:%osSKU%] if not defined skunotfound ( -echo This product does not support %KS% Activation. +echo This product does not support %KS% activation. set fixes=%fixes% %mas%unsupported_products_activation call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%unsupported_products_activation" ) else ( -echo Required License files not found in %SysPath%\spp\tokens\skus\ +echo Required license files not found in %SysPath%\spp\tokens\skus\ set fixes=%fixes% %mas%troubleshoot call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot" ) @@ -574,12 +574,12 @@ goto :ks_office :: Install key if defined changekey ( -call :dk_color %Blue% "[%altedition%] Edition product key will be used to enable %KS% activation." +call :dk_color %Blue% "[%altedition%] edition product key will be used to enable %KS% activation." echo: ) if defined winsub ( -call :dk_color %Blue% "Windows Subscription [SKU ID-%slcSKU%] found. Script will activate base edition [SKU ID-%regSKU%]." +call :dk_color %Blue% "Windows Subscription [SKU ID-%slcSKU%] found. The script will activate the base edition [SKU ID-%regSKU%]." echo: )